Vikings Poem by Tom Billsborough

Vikings

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On sharp black rocks the sea sloughs,
Snaking new channels, sharp as its abrading sound.
Its profound insidious motion cleaving hollows
As the living brain shapes pathways
For its new endeavours,
Its exploratory fervour.
I am this restless ocean of extravert desires
And introverted fears, a tidal being,
As the sharp, black bow cleaves the passive sands
My writhing consciousness alert
Extends outwards to the doubly curved horizon
As pale blue from the dark gradually unfolds
And the red lips of dawn shape new ideas,
And back towards the shore, my cries are echoing
That abrading sound, that vision of the conqueror.

Monday, January 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annette Aitken 12 January 2017

Some beautful visuals within this one Tom, I was on that boat. ready to conqueor. ARGHHHHH! ! ! ! ! nicely penned. Annette

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Susan Williams 11 January 2017

You have the greatest imagination, Tom. I think I already know this and then you write another poem and again I am blown away by your imagination. My brain is a Viking bravely forging through new oceans of knowledge and navigating new trade routes between harbors of discovery. Well done, my friend across the pond!

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Tom Billsborough 12 January 2017

We are all Vikings exploring new ground. I reckon you'd be a leader of the band setting your feet on new shores and giving us new horizons with you brilliant writing. Thanks for your comments.

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Tom Billsborough

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