Virgin Poem by Shirial Xial

Virgin

Rating: 5.0


Virgin

He loves virgin,

That he always said.

It’s pure,

It’s few.

And it’s just a litter red.

It was made in bed.

My pure, he called,

Has gone with another rich man.

He got a fail.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 16 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Shirial. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

0 0 Reply
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent poem with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success