Voices When Whisper Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Voices When Whisper

Rating: 5.0


voices still whisper
in the ear to the tunes of time
waves oceanic razz ling
by the warmth of the sun.

the morning delight
standing on the beach
looking to the golden plumes
as if locked into the plexus
of love and the grace divine

yet the moon as dappled in white and blue
sitting by lattice of your window
looking to the horizon as I am
betwixt of time and sea

as the blue sea as waking
seem to keep us yet apart
from all universe’s blues
still revered by their gleams

when I put my palm
beneath my checks and rave up
as glimmered by your smiles
mingling within verses of you love

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Once again you have written verse to be treasured, another gift without ribbons.10!

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Linda Weischedel 23 December 2007

OUTSTANDING POEM DOC! I love this....you are getting a 10 for sure. Love and Hugs, Linda

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Ewigi Liebe 20 December 2007

who shrivel up and seem to die when Love has gone and left them cold No matter if they have been told The Love of theirs was not returned Their hearts desire that left them burned A cold and calculating eye had given nothing but a lie And so alone they now do sit their hearts as empty as a pit and when they hear their lover scorn they wish that they had not been born and then one day that's full of sun. Love it thou...credit of 10++

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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