Void Poem by Neela Nath Das

Void

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She was alone under the
Nagkeshar tree.
Blurred was her vision
with tearful eyes.
No, was the word
she uttered to say No.
It was tearing her
pigeon -chest with pain though!
Time strolled with heavy footsteps,
since then, as she expected
the outburst and the piercing words- - - -
'I won't let you go! '
Nothing was thrown like that
from the other part.....
Which pounced on her as
blank- sheet signed by both
with their hearts' content!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 09 February 2013

emotions running high. Yet ending with contented hearts. Sometimes we worry too much about the simple things.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 09 February 2013

A poignant write which is very captivating!

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Valerie Dohren 08 February 2013

A poem reflecting disappointment methinks. Well penned.

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