maria sudibyo

Freshman - 788 Points (280883 / parist van java)

Waiting For You - Poem by maria sudibyo

Waiting for you
Maybe like making a cotton candy
Looks simple but hard
Feels fun but need patience
To collect the fiber made sugar
That you very much in love

Waiting for you
Maybe like weaving a cotton candy
Taking hours but beautiful
Seems fragile but worth the smile
To gain a fluffy made sugar
That can not be shrunk by time


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Mao kun, mata ashita ne

Comments about Waiting For You by maria sudibyo

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (4/5/2014 10:10:00 PM)

    nice love poem interwoven memories, desire, mind images thank you loving it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 5, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, April 7, 2014


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