Wake up,
brush it off,
work it out,
skin-so-soft.
Make-up,
brush my hair,
work all day,
in my chair.
Fake love,
rush the night,
in my dreams,
can't wait till light.
Make love,
rush my life,
wait for you,
to be your wife.
well i really lik the fastness of this peom. I think it puts across the meaning and message well. I love the words and the way you've put them on the page :) 10/10 x stella
This one is fast and a bit sad for me. Very good emotion conveyed here though. In this crazy fast-paced world, we have to go back to the slowness of past decades I think and sip like they did-the years go by fast enough so take charge and make sure they're good ones. I ACTUALLY LOVED THIS ONE! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love the idea of it simple n to the point.