War Poem by Abraham de la Torre

War

Rating: 5.0


Unpremeditated, just a reflexive blink,
Was not as startled as the glitter of grime
Against the sun-streaked light.

The idea of a memorandum-laden airplane
Stirred the rust of my machine guns.

Unrelenting, my magazine would spew
Spurts of rage till the argument
Yields to the louder, more determined Soldier.

I would give my victory no rest.
It will die, of its own accord,
Among the intricate complexities of
Newer, better armament.

Rubber bands. Rubber sheaths.

My conscious song would be a beat
Rhythmic as a heart
Even as it skips
A splintered auricle.

I would want to be a mutineer.
I would hop and skip and leave them dead.

Ensconced in silk,
My wandering aircraft describes
A pocket.
The enemy is avoided.
Such daredevil feat.

The maneuver interrupting
The train of deployed dust.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 25 February 2009

anyone the know poetry will say this was a good write. but there are normal ppl.tht know know certain things about poetry. I could give this poem a 10 but some1 might have a different oppinion not the best I have seen but good 10s

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Meggie Gultiano 26 November 2008

an excellent piece. I love this

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Hunter Dasten 13 November 2008

You managed to articulate the uncertainty of war very well. Truly a fantastic write. Keep up the good work my friend!

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Ency Bearis 12 November 2008

wonderful simile poem...eloquent verses well delivered...excellent..A10+ Ency Bearis

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Abraham de la Torre

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Bacacay, Albay, Philippines
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