(August 9th 1991 / Chicago)

What do you think this poem is about?

War is...

War is fighting brothers,
War is bombs exploding,
War is crying mothers,
War is bodies floating.

War is following orders,
War is young dated,
War is falling mortars,
War is time wasted.

War is mixed blood,
War is true sadness,
War is wet mud,
War is ultimate madness.

War is innocent deaths,
War is many tears,
War is unwelcomed guests
And they all last for years.

Submitted: Wednesday, May 13, 2009
Edited: Thursday, May 14, 2009


Comments about this poem (War is... by Cody Stephen Heldak )

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  • Koby Moore (6/15/2010 10:18:00 AM)

    Really makes you think doesn't it? Great poem

    Hey, can you and anyone who read this comments come check my poems because I'm new and would enjoy what you guys think of it
    Thnx if you did,
    Koby Moore

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  • Monique Vasquez (5/18/2009 5:01:00 PM)

    I LOVE this poem! ! ! It so deep and true. It make me think hard about those who are dying and getting hurt. It is sad. Great poem! ! ! !

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  • Shannon Fuhrman (5/14/2009 10:46:00 PM)

    makes you think hard about what's going on in the world..
    very good poem!

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (5/14/2009 10:40:00 PM)

    Poem for mankind, love it.10+

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/14/2009 12:59:00 AM)

    awareness raising piece/ the scrooge of war...harmful everywhere

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  • Jenna Thomas (5/13/2009 11:39:00 PM)

    I agree. I almost signed up at 18....I couldn't. I see your realness

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