Warfare Poem by Jacqueline Fitzgerald

Warfare

Rating: 3.5


Like sickly children tumbling down stars
Feverishly clinging on to life with every last gasp
Roots loosening in the moon dust slowly letting them down
Until asphyxiation takes over their weak little lungs
Almost like bullets in water
Dazzling at first
Until it kisses the first touch of silky skin
Shredding its way like earthquakes
Causing volcanic ruptures
Sickly sweet lava flows slowly killing it's luster
The gaunt cheeks of men become grey
Their eyes stare to oblivion
As snow envelopes their cold bodies
Pushing them to stars

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 31 October 2013

It's a nice poem. 'Their eyes stare to oblivion As snow envelopes their cold bodies Pushing them to stars' A beautiful description! The last word of the first and the last lines are the same. I think the former needs a spelling correction.

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Don Nguyen 22 October 2013

Sitting at walmart, nothing else to do

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