Wasted Love Poem by Lorcelie A Tenorio

Wasted Love

Rating: 4.5


I went for a walk along the beach
Not knowing what I want to reach
Confused heart and mind is all I have.

I have thought of all the things we shared
Happy times and memories we felt
But still not contented at the end.

I don't know why I'd become
So demanding and so unkind
All these years that we are one.

Maybe because I am so in love
That you are my breath and strength
And honey…. you are my life.

You really did not care how I felt
When I kept on telling you
I want you and I to commit.

There were times that I wondered why
If you really love me or not
That I feel so lost and empty I can't hide.

I want to give up but you said "no"
That maybe one day
My dreams will come true.

This love that I have for you
Is so strong that it breaks me in two
Am feeling to give up or wait for you.

But somehow I realised
No matter what I do
My wasted love is
Still there for you….

Poem made by:
Lorcelie (Lorie) A. Tenorio
17 August 2010
Tuesday 12: 07 am

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 23 September 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An honest and introspective rendition vivacious with emotions. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 September 2015

Maybe because I am so in love That you are my breath and strength And honey…. you are my life. The love and its struggle and the yearning of the soul and the body you have portrayed very well here in this poem. Thank you very much dear Poetess

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Lorie Tenorio 17 September 2018

Hi Doc, thank you for your comment - it was a feeling from deep within my soul...

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David Wood 15 April 2013

Is any love a wasted love? A lovely poem & good write.

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