Watching Wrens On Sunday Afternoon Poem by elysabeth faslund

Watching Wrens On Sunday Afternoon

Rating: 5.0


Sunlit rain drips Spring
With diamonds'
Fire...

Unstoppable desire for
Greenery, in
Jeweled panes...

The wrens. Their nest...
Dead twigs...
Supporting Life,

Then empty.

Til rain fires return
Window panes' diamonds.

Til months return tiny life
To dead twigs.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 27 April 2008

A delightful poem, that captures the heart! Great read Elysabeth! ! *10*! ! Best Wishes! Friend Thad

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Many symbols in a poem written simply and softly coloured.

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Colin J... 27 April 2008

Sunlit rain drips Spring With diamonds' Fire... Got me, straight away... beautiful... Colin J...

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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