Water Spring(Haiku) Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Water Spring(Haiku)

Rating: 4.8


A sign of life spurts
From the earth's bursting bosom
All living souls drink.

Water Spring(Haiku)
Thursday, May 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 09 June 2016

Great photograph - it's so refreshing! This is a poem that conveys confidence and calm. I love that closing image of community: ALL LIVING SOULS DRINK.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 June 2016

To thank the Creator Almighty and, to respect life. Thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 27 May 2016

Outstanding imagery and a fantastic Haiku....Loved it NI.100+++

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Kelly Kurt 26 May 2016

A pure Haiku. Awesome!

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Nosheen Irfan 27 May 2016

Thanku Kelly for your kind comments.

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Barry Middleton 26 May 2016

Very nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Nosheen Irfan 27 May 2016

Thanku Barry. That's a whole lota exclamation. lol

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Lahore, Pakistan
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