Watery Angel Poem by ajith patnaik

Watery Angel

Rating: 5.0


before me does she stand
like a watery angel.
everthing, did i forget about myself.
i was immersed and drowned in her magic.
meaning of my life and my soul
reached its zenith that very moment.
the music of the drops
falling and splashing on the ground
sounded as if the veins of my heart
became the strings of musical instruments
sing for her and applauding
the devine beauty under
the thin blanket of magic
created by the drops of water.
this dream seems so true and
i know not how to freeze it.
but if this really is a dream
i know not how to face the truth.
truth, that this is all a hollow dream.
my silence is forcing me to stop thinking
about the truth which is covered with sharp thorns.
i know not where my letter of love
is lost without reaching her.
this seems to be a curse
in the disguise of a boon.
but i care not about the truth
as a sculpture of her image is
already erect in the temple of my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 31 December 2008

wow beautiful ajith, i had tears in my eyes I want to see you happy dear at all times Oh Lord let it not be a dream for Ajith let it be the truth-- make it happen A+++ and many 10ssssss anjali

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Demon lover 31 December 2008

thats a very beautiful poem

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Kesav Easwaran 30 December 2008

dedicated words on dedicated feelings...good poem Ajith, , , dreams do have a telling on real things happening...10

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Seema Aarella 26 December 2008

Very deeply expressed feelings, the beauty of dream and its pleasure....along with the the fear of facing the reality, which is inevitable. Quite a nice concept...and ending is really good. hope your feelings transcend this dream without being altered by harsh truth! ! ! !

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