beautyqueen 639


Way Down Deep


I have a special place under the sea
Where no one else can go, only me
It’s quiet and calm
Dark and safe
And I feel at home there
In my special place

There is a boy
Who’s just like me
He’s a mixture of all the things
That I want to be
He’s kind and gentle
But brave and strong
And when I stay there
He sings me a song

A song about love
In a far off place
A song about happiness, joy and grace
And as I float
Softly to sleep
He tells me he’ll always be there
In my heart, way down deep

Submitted: Monday, April 01, 2013
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This poem is about my oasis, a place where I go when I'm stressed or angry, or when I need to relax. Of course, it's all in my head, but that doesn't make it fake.

Comments about this poem (Way Down Deep by beautyqueen 639 )

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  • Rookie - 20 Points Bianca F. (8/8/2014 11:17:00 AM)

    Very simple, yet full of beauty and meaning. & a nice flow, to boot. :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,072 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/7/2013 12:27:00 PM)

    He tells me he’ll always be there
    In my heart, way down deep
    Good to see the poem ending on a happy note. (Report) Reply

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