You live in your world
I live in mine, like two wires
Cutting the same sky
Wow really you are so good at conveying your thoughts. I need to learn a lot as i'm just a beginner. :)
We share the sky the only line in between is waters and bridges yer the same world Different environments. like two wires Cutting the same sky Beautifully written piece My friend Keep writing
Cigeng is right, Anne - Your style is so very concise. Your poems are populated with feelings, not words. // But this poem is longer than it seems, because I find two possible meanings: First, as in Cigeng's view, the two will never meet, actually go further apart; second, the lines could be electrical and there could already be a connection. And then they may find a way to meet in real space and time.
'You' can be the rest of the world, the connection between me and them is that we share the same sky :)
Yes, we, soemtimes just like two parallel lines, never interwoven... I liked the concise style Anne.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Anne, I just read this for the first time. It makes an impression on me for its brevity- I'm a fan of brevity- and for the striking simile. Thank you. - Glen Kappy