We Are Women Folk Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

We Are Women Folk

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We all are women folk
Dance more with less talk
Never mix with outside world
But present the culture as may be beautifully told

As rain arrives with thunder
We create muse and wonder
It is for making the scene beautiful
As people remain remorseful

World needs peace and stability
We can assure it with our ability
We may be illiterate and un-expressive
But our gesture is unique an subjective

Civilize world has nothing more to offer
They have more points to differ
We have technique to unite people
They have come round with great struggle

Why do we rob their happiness?
Why not we allow them to live with smiling face?
The world has come very close
The trust is only needed to repose

How to do it with effective show?
We have caliber to compose and throw
To audience about the plight of normal individual
Other people take it merely as casual

Human life is precious
It must flow continuous
We need not worry more about tomorrow
Let us concentrate more on today

We may be called illiterate
But have effective skill to relate
When we can present and specially indicate
It makes people to enjoy and not to suffocate

N.B. the group can compose on the spot and dance along with it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 December 2012

We all are women folk Dance more with less talk Never mix with outside world But present the culture as may be beautifully told

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 December 2012

Seen by 1 Sabbani Laxminarayana Wonderful! 6 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 December 2012

James F. Cunningham likes this. James F. Cunningham I love the way this one flows. The underlying meaning is excellent. Your poems are always very well thought out and delivered perfectly.8 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 December 2012

ell said Divya Nishant Ranote14 hours ago hats off Comment 0 well done Paul Harmon E.14 hours ago i really enjoy reading your poems, , , it speaks loud and clear... Comment 0 good drkgbalakrishnan kandangath14 hours ago good Comment 0 good Sajad Wani13 hours ago nice Comment 0 good michael buster14 hours ago Goodjob

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 December 2012

Seen by 2 Olivia Chavez Fabian likes this.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 December 2012

Charles Darnell The photo illustrates your topic very well. 10 hours ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 December 2012

Tribhawan Kaul Women of today is more enlightened, empowered and of substance. Slowly and gradually they are creating a niche of themselves in this part of the world. Lovely poem Hasmukh Mehtaji. 7 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 December 2012

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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