We Tried It Your Way Poem by David Darbyshire

We Tried It Your Way

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We tried it your way.
We tried and tried.
We really tried.
To do it your way.

It's very clear we really tried,
we went without fear,
we didn't hide,
we'll try again it's so clear.

Along the road
the way is split,
the map doesn't show
which way to go.

Life is so short
to throw away,
to build a fort
and hide all day.

We should open the door
the door of life,
there is much more
than 'one way'.

But once again
we fell in despair,
we lie there slain
life is so unfair.

We really tried, 'we really tried'
to do it your way,
the day has come when we both cried,
we really tried, to do it your way.

The day will end
of trying it your way,
by the next bend
we will try, TRY it MY way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nalini Hebbar 10 August 2006

try it no other way but your way, dave...only untrodden paths holds the beauty and novelty of doing anything...love...nalini

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Tranquil Ocean 10 August 2006

Amazing mix of humour interlaced with profundity.Good read

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Patricia Gale 10 August 2006

Try, try again. Delightful morning read Dave.

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