Weep Poem by Rini Shibu

Weep

Rating: 4.7


Flew among the flowers
Tasting finest honey
Rolled on bed of roses
Embracing its sweet fragrance
Unaware of the thorns
Which pierced and tore
Empty heart weeps
In the dark night then sleeps
Licking the wound at the dawn
She flies high even more strong

Monday, April 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: strong
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 08 April 2019

Weeping flew among the flowers. This is an amazing poem brilliantly penned.

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Bill Cantrell 08 April 2019

Wonderful poem, you poetry has become very good, it is nice to see you posting, had been off for awhile...great poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 July 2019

Pierced and tore! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Julia Luber 21 June 2019

optimistic forceful poem

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Nadeem Ishaque 11 April 2019

Strength comes from the experience of joy and beauty and accepting the intrinsic pain of that experience. Beautifully penned.

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Kostas Lagos 09 April 2019

Splendid poem Rini! Loved it!

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Lamar Cole 08 April 2019

This is a very wonderful and very creative poem.

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