Kranthi Pothineni


Well Of Loneliness - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

In well of loneliness
I learned my lesson
Learned not to lessen
Learned to heal lesion
And also to listen

To listen inner voice
Which made a noise
To make me hoist
And made me foist
All the past moist

It made me drink
The pain of pink
Also made me think
About my inner link
That powered my sink

Sink into dark well
Had put me in cell
With no ringing bell
Whom should I tell?
The beauty of hell

Hell made me yell
Also made me jell
With my inner well
Well is really well
Loneliness is to dwell


Comments about Well Of Loneliness by Kranthi Pothineni

  • Rookie - 5 Points Janell Cressman (3/28/2009 11:58:00 AM)

    I kind of liked it, the flow was definitly good! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Pablo Cruise (3/27/2009 8:50:00 AM)

    Intriguing format, Kranthi. Keep developing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Joseph Poewhit (3/27/2009 5:57:00 AM)

    Poem has an interesting way of reaching for the rhyme at the end of each line. Loneliness is only a state of attitude. People usually avoid pain or uncomfortable situations, for self centered pleasure (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 794 Points Louis Rams (3/26/2009 8:59:00 PM)

    HELLS BRIGHT FIRE IS DARK WITH DESIRE
    FOR THE SOUL IS LOST IN THE FLAME, NEVER TO BE THE SAME.
    THIS POEM TAKES YOU HIGH INTO THE SKY
    THEN DROPS YOU DOWN QUICKLY.

    A GOOD WRITE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (3/26/2009 8:08:00 PM)

    rhyming wrds..nice to read..
    naizz (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (3/26/2009 6:26:00 PM)

    Very nicea bit funny
    hahahaha
    i laugh
    readin this thank 10s (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (3/26/2009 10:52:00 AM)

    this is an interesting piece. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 26, 2009



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