Well Of Loneliness Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Well Of Loneliness

Rating: 5.0


In well of loneliness
I learned my lesson
Learned not to lessen
Learned to heal lesion
And also to listen

To listen inner voice
Which made a noise
To make me hoist
And made me foist
All the past moist

It made me drink
The pain of pink
Also made me think
About my inner link
That powered my sink

Sink into dark well
Had put me in cell
With no ringing bell
Whom should I tell?
The beauty of hell

Hell made me yell
Also made me jell
With my inner well
Well is really well
Loneliness is to dwell

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

this is an interesting piece.

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Eyan Desir 26 March 2009

Very nicea bit funny hahahaha i laugh readin this thank 10s

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Janell Cressman 28 March 2009

I kind of liked it, the flow was definitly good! ! ! ! ! !

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Pablo Cruise 27 March 2009

Intriguing format, Kranthi. Keep developing.

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Joseph Poewhit 27 March 2009

Poem has an interesting way of reaching for the rhyme at the end of each line. Loneliness is only a state of attitude. People usually avoid pain or uncomfortable situations, for self centered pleasure

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Louis Rams 26 March 2009

HELLS BRIGHT FIRE IS DARK WITH DESIRE FOR THE SOUL IS LOST IN THE FLAME, NEVER TO BE THE SAME. THIS POEM TAKES YOU HIGH INTO THE SKY THEN DROPS YOU DOWN QUICKLY. A GOOD WRITE

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Naidz Ladia 26 March 2009

rhyming wrds..nice to read.. naizz

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