Theresa Minu Dominic

Rookie - 0 Points (07.03.1991 / Wynad, Kerala)

What Colour Does Love Paint In? - Poem by Theresa Minu Dominic

Red, said zara.
Red of lips that've just been kissed.
The red of unmade cheeks
Where passion and restrain wage wars unseen.

But, then I saw her lying dead,
Her love unreturned,
Her passion unperturbed.

I looked for the red on her unkissed lips.
I looked for the red from the unseen wars.
I saw the red on her forlorn form.
The blood that wet her undone hair.

Yellow, said the Sunflower -
Yellow of a sunny summer day.
I watched her as she danced in joy-
Drinking in her lover's sight,
Fluttering coyly as he smiled.

Then, i saw him leave,
His blithe yellow, now a sober hue
Of orangish smoke and steamy blue:
The masterpiece he made to bid his bye.

Her merry petals, now a heap of brown,
The Sunflower heaved a cold, cold sigh
And laid her head on her crumpled fronds -
An ode to love that wilts with time.

Topic(s) of this poem: love, love and loss, love and pain, truth

Comments about What Colour Does Love Paint In? by Theresa Minu Dominic

  • Rookie - 0 Points Theresa Minu Dominic (6/29/2012 1:10:00 AM)

    Thank you, Kate.
    Thank you, everybody. I've written quite a few poems after this one. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Kate Thwaite (6/28/2012 11:30:00 AM)

    I like this very much.Good imagery and thoughtful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Theresa Minu Dominic (6/1/2012 9:55:00 AM)

    Yes, it is. Thank you so much for all the appreciation. Criticism is also eagerly looked forward to. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,417 Points Saadat Tahir (6/1/2012 4:54:00 AM)

    beautiful imagery, artistry, metaphor and a clear capability to do some nice poetry.
    loved the run and flow.

    nice poetry
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (6/1/2012 4:35:00 AM)

    Heart touching.U have presented it with a tone of reality. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 1, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, May 25, 2015

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