What Do You Do? Poem by WaitingFor SomethingNew

What Do You Do?

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What do you do when everything seems to fall
Like you've lost it all
Everything runs in circles in your head
When you're laying in bed
Late at night when everyones asleep
All you ever want is to scream
And no more do you dream
What do you do when our life is upside down
And on the inside, all you do is frown
Yeah, yeah you give all smiles
But happiness is within miles
What do you do when you dont know what you want
When all you do is put on a front
What do you do when you dont know yourself anymroe
When you're alway looking to the dorr
Waiting for the darknes to fall
But most of all
What do you do what your heart is ice cold
And love seems old?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

the answer is...talk to god, he changes evrything, may be nt the way we want, but sure that is gud for us...a butiful write, heal up ur emotions..

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Carol Bryant 21 October 2008

Really outstanding! It is one thing to feel the pain, another to write about it, and something pretty extraordinary to let others see it~putting yourself out there raw emotions and all! Thanks for sharing

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Jessica Jemima 17 October 2008

You write a poem ;) That's what you do! Very nice I like the rhymes. Good work! Keep up the writing and find the answer! =)

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