What Else Except Devotion? Poem by Baloyi Mukelani

What Else Except Devotion?

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A tender feeling of devotion is in different ways,
But never been proud of one.
Its affections are same as the smelling of aroma
Or a- taste of honey.

It need both as traction-as one heart bonding,
Because it does not show an antagonism,
locality or portrayed.

It willingness desire courage and motivational support at-most,
Because it is not aspired nor inherited.

Every seeing count-
And its affiliations is-of huge fondness
And there-by,
Distance is supported by faith in achieve of honest,
Hence its devotion and jealous.

That's all of love in one scale to enjoy,
Not all about regrets-
But peace and integrity,
Kind and inspiration
That's what I call devotion.

Sunday, October 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Devotion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adolf Baloyi 23 June 2017

beautiful poem, i will read it again and again

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Chinedu Dike 16 May 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A nice poem indeed. Devotion is the total submission to a cause, God, god, love.... Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Tajudeen Shah 19 October 2014

Devotion is glorified! splendid dimensions and spectacular interpretations lead the reader too engage in pursuit of enticing realms, varied nature of devotion. authentic, and passionate, a true praise too, with proof and bold arguments. keep penning to the unbounded possibilities and ever growing sweetness of poesy. God bless. rgds. would appreciate your sharp review on my ' shortest epic' just posted here. rgds.

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