What Has Been Achieve Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

What Has Been Achieve



Once a task,
Has been successfully accomplished...
It no longer matters who ignores,
Or refuses to acknowledge...
The doing of it to achieve.
Since those choosing,
To disbelieve reality...
Continually,
Are often the same people...
Who bring attention,
To the significance...
Of what others would not,
Notice.
If what had been done,
No one would mention.
With attention upon it,
Given.

'Did you see that? '

-No! What? -

'Over there!
Can you believe it? '

-Yes.
Thank you for bringing it,
To my attention.
Why do you look disappointed? -

Tuesday, October 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 18 October 2016

Life in general as also societal is full of mystic inclinations. A section or other of the society will always criticize any best achievement and point out it's shortcomings. Anyway, that is life. Thanks for sharing a thought provoking poem.

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