What Is Love Poem by Tareq Jalabi

What Is Love

Rating: 4.3


Love is an energy
which could not be worn out
but it changes through life
from artist to art
it is the main reason
why a lover has a heart
so loving each other again
we should start
what`s the point of having
wheels without a cart
they might go on
but they will be apart

we have became like
the moon and the sun
when one of us come
the other is gone
i hate my life that
i hope i have a gun
so writing our story
finally will be done

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Grezlay Figueroa 19 June 2008

wow! i love this...deep

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Sandra Fowler 20 June 2008

Very genuine. You show promise. Keep up the good work. Warm regards, Sandra

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V Ramkissoon 10 July 2008

dude....ur poems are *WOW*... totally blew me away...........: D

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Rema Prasanna 11 July 2008

a bit of frustration but you expressed your feelings very well.... wish spring of love bloom in your life... Re, a

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Wahida Wassini 18 July 2008

Wow...i like this poem.. ^^

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Allie Rodriguez 13 September 2009

Beautiful defenition of love. I really enjoyed reading it! :) Allie♥

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Kesav Easwaran 27 August 2009

'.........................like the moon and the sun when one of us come the other is gone'... i liked the pathetic humor inside these lines...good work...thanks...10

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Delicate Heart 28 April 2009

nice piece, well expressed your own feelings, though some effing us words disgrace her slightly, keep writing pearls of wisdom.......rated ten for the love contained within..............

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Greenwolfe 1962 08 February 2009

This started out so positive, but it ended so sad. With the title, 'What is Love', how can that be? It seems that your love has become a sadness. I hope that has changed. Your stanzas were quite beautiful. A nice flowing poem to read. GW62

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Little Morning Star 02 January 2009

love is really beautiful for everyone.. this is beautiful work..

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