Robzin Da Poet

What really makes me?

What really makes me?

What really makes me? is it the clothes I wear? Is it the color of my skin?

What really makes me? Is it the beauty of my character that attracts the ladies?

What really makes? Is it the fact that I look like nelson Mandela

What really makes me? Is it my smile that warms people’s heart.

What really makes me? is it the way I walk or is it the way I talk Ei I know I know.

What really makes me? Let me confess to you I’m still being made by my purpose and with my destiny which is shaping me.

So what is it that makes me? I am a question that needs to be answer well you tell me!

Submitted: Tuesday, June 25, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013
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the question what really makes me? its story of who are you in life. i starting writing this poem when i was in school in grade 11.while trying to figure out after school what i was going to do with my life and where i was going in life. meanwhile this question what really makes me? , i dedicate this poem to everyone who is losing they way. this poem was inspire by people who matter the most to me.

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