What Should I Do? Poem by jaclyn jackson

What Should I Do?



What should I do? What should I do? I love you, But you dont love me too? I sliced my wrist havent aten in days. But whatever Im done with this, Im done with you we're through. WAIT no come back dont leave, Look at all the pain you are causing me. Why cant you just hold me tight and never wanna leave me? I want you in my life but I cant handle all this pain, You dont understand that I have the broken peice of glass up against my skin, You dont relize how much blood I am loosing. I dont want this pain anymore I really truley dont, Wait what was that? You say we're through? No baby please I NEED you! Without you im nothing, Without you I need to die. What was that? You tell me I need to not cry? I go to give you a hug, But instead you give me a shove making me fall to the floor, Leaving me there. So I stare at the ceiling wondering aimlessly what is my point of being on this world that I would know as hell.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashley LeBlanc 23 March 2008

I completley agree with william. I was the same way, letting a man i care about so much, get the best of me. Dont let anyone tell you that you arenn't beautiful, because everyone is in a different way. Find someone who loves you for you, and that DOES show u respect. Dont give up on life, follow your dreams and keep writing, let it all out. And remember that no man is worth your tears.

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William Jackson 23 March 2008

You should lose this guy and get some self respect. Never debase yourself, starve yourself, cut yourself, threaten to kill yourself, for anyone. Have dignity and love yourself. You are worth it. Obviously this person has not been of much encouragement to you and does not know how to love. Nurture your soul, develop your mind, and make the most of your God given assets. Develop your art. Continue to write. Be an independent woman. Become strong, smart, and self-reliant. Give yourself some time. Then choose the man you want. Right now you need to learn how to take care of yourself. Surround yourself with kind and successful people. Limit yourself to speaking only one negative thought per day. Choose a new life for yourself.

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