What This World Will Look Like? Poem by M. Asim Nehal

What This World Will Look Like?

Rating: 5.0


When moonlight will find a place under the sun,
When the winds will flow like waves,
When blood will have a spectrum,
What this world will look like?

When sorrows will fly off into orbit
And the grains will fall from clouds
When rivers will churn the milk
And happiness will grow like leaves.

O' Lord wake me up in that world
Where the differences get dissolved
Enmity gets evaporated into the air
And love surrounds the life.

Tuesday, August 30, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,human life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Martinez Salotori 30 August 2022

O' Lord wake me up in that world Where the differences get dissolved Enmity gets evaporated into the air And love surrounds the life.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 31 August 2022

if the love surrounded everything lovingly then there is no suffering except peaceful life.

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Richard Wlodarski 31 August 2022

Spectacular vivid imagery! Every line in the poem is absolutely magnificent. Top marks and more, Dr Nehal!

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Bharati Nayak 31 August 2022

Wow--A great poem! So beautiful dream with a prayer to God to make this earth a paradise!

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Nabakishore Dash 31 August 2022

Effulgent concluding stanza dear Dr.Nehal.

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Rebecca Navarre 15 October 2022

Magnificent images! .. With such deep beauty! .. Beyond #'S! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Anjandev Roy 01 September 2022

Marvelous piece.......thank u, dear friend...

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Indira Renganathan 01 September 2022

'O' Lord wake me up in that world Where the differences get dissolved Enmity gets evaporated into the air And love surrounds the life.'...very hopeful write

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 September 2022

Excellent message on climate change Bravo!

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Sandra Feldman 31 August 2022

Plus a Galaxy of Stars.

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