Wheather Right Or Wrong Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Wheather Right Or Wrong

Rating: 4.9


Whether wrong or right,
For rights you always fight,
Show the strength and also might,
Grab the opportunity when in sight,

When flying a kite in sky?
Never think of distance,
Not also of resistance,
Only of aim and substance,

So when love is near and in sight,
Hold in arm with grip and tight,
It’s not show of strength,
But powerful attachment with length,

At a time of grief,
Offering solace in brief,
It is just a small leaf,
But can be felt by even a deaf,

Meeting friends after long absence,
Shows the love of great essence,
Eyes full of tears and face red,
Not so felt at the time of wed,

Parents, friends shower the love,
Hold the arm, embrace or hug,
Holding with love is always right,
What a tight, might but it’s alright.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Bhikhubhai 28 July 2009

Whether wrong or right, For rights you always fight, Show the strength and also might, Grab the opportunity when in sight, we should go for it with clear intent...10

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Bhanubhai Montu Shah 28 July 2009

Whether wrong or right, For rights you always fight, u go for it....10

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Kamlesh Ambalal 29 July 2009

Whether wrong or right, For rights you always fight, Show the strength and also might, Grab the opportunity when in sight, must strive for goal...10

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Ketan Rajgor 30 July 2009

Whether wrong or right, For rights you always fight, Show the strength and also might, Grab the opportunity when in sight, ...we should try earnestly...10

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Pittle Shaileja 30 July 2009

Whether wrong or right, For rights you always fight, Show the strength and also might...strive and go for it...10

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Saroj Davde 22 October 2009

When flying a kite in sky? Never think of distance, Not also of resistance, Only of aim and substance,

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Vijay Suwarnkar 09 October 2009

Whether wrong or right, For rights you always fight, Show the strength and also might, Grab the opportunity when in sight,

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 06 October 2009

Subtle poetic exploration of right and wrong. Educative and ten. dr.sakti Cordially invite to my page. ds

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Ashley Paul 06 October 2009

is it confined to me alone? ’m the soul only suffer, do you have any clue or answer? does the answer lie with only power?

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Argum Sheth 10 September 2009

When flying a kite in sky? Never think of distance, Not also of resistance, Only of aim and substance,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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