When I Poem by khalid alalawi

When I



when i look at the star

up the sky

to me you are so far

i wish i could fly

what a lovely you are

you complete my life

i wish i could die with you

how lovely you are

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 12 September 2009

uhum..this is nice again..hope your wish will be grant..

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Joseph Poewhit 04 September 2009

Wish death with someone is deep.

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 04 September 2009

How lovely, nice and simple? well done, I enjoyed reading it

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