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Paul Mwenelupembe


When I am Closer


By the river, when I am closer
It flows, erodes and overflows
By the river I flood a tie to myself
And look into a blue deep water
This fresh water, grows for my heart
And capsizes my rock over and on
I will die if I never turn this
I will turn, turning these river eyes
To my spring I go into for reall
When I am Closer, by the river Nile

Submitted: Friday, April 26, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 25, 2013

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Happy sometimes not happy thoughts will never end, we live with emotions. Because of this word love to a woman the persona will always think! !

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