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(25-01-1991 / srinagar, kashmir)

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When I'm feeling down.

On a night like this, I wish I cud have you
With me, by my side
Laying down next to me on my twin-sized bed that can comfortably fit the both of us
I wish u were here on my right, feeling ur warmth
The fire u exude on a cold winter night
And I could feel the softness of ur hands
And hear ur heavy breathing
And listen to ur heart beating
As I would rest my head on top of ur chest n feel it rise and fall…
I wish I cud be with u…
Just sleeping right next to u
And hear ur haunting whispers against my ears
That ring loud against this still quietness of the dark
And we wud drift off to the subconscious…
Together
And who knws, maybe we wud dream abt each other
And when morning arrives, and it's rays call upon my window, I would wake up to u
And feel your body so close
And see ur dazzling face; asleep like an angel
And feel ur breathing…
The same air wen u exhale, I inhale n take as my own
I want u
I want all of u
Even the air you release and make it mine.

Submitted: Wednesday, February 06, 2013


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