When I Parted From You Poem by Basant Swain

When I Parted From You

Rating: 3.5


The relationship has grown stale gum
tears will not stop flowing from the eyes
Do not forget he's passed the age
The lovely miss meetings
The tip - throw those sweet things
It 's time to pass quickly
He's in my hands to gift your hand
You get me so angry
He repeatedly persuade me
Vows to live and die with the gap
It's a day but its separation
Pain arises in the heart
Ever wish you could visit me again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard Kennedy 22 January 2014

Very real and human, beautifully expressing a painful reality with hope.

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Sarojini Pattayat 21 January 2014

nice and touching poem.Really wonderful.words chosen are appropriate. happy writing

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Gajanan Mishra 21 January 2014

vow to live and die with the gap, wonderful. I like it.

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