When I Saw Your Kiss Poem by Jess Soto

When I Saw Your Kiss

Rating: 5.0


Typical dreary night,
With the lunar spell cast upon us all,
The roads doomed to silence that no soul can see.
But who knows, maybe this is the night.
When you told me,
'How I wish to see you for a great night, '
I knew that I would be able to let myself be yours.
Friends warned me,
Not to let myself be your slave for any reason,
But it did not matter because I was blinded by your passion.
But so it came,
I walk to your domain and see...
Your lips parched onto another's, not mine.
Rage is my friend!
It was this that I could not stand!
I was your personal pet and I lost my dignity...
Funny though,
Because of my dignity being absent...
I felt nothing but a complete confusion but with a hint of rage...
Your spell was...
A siren to me and you played your hand right,
And now I weep to the sea and let myself go from this world.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brenda Arroyo 11 March 2010

this is lovely. terribly sad but lovely. you should write more Jesse! I love it everytime I get a trip into that beautiful mind of yours...

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Isaac Maliya 03 August 2009

A well thought poem with good diction. I loved it! It's a 10+++ Thanks a lot.

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