When I Say 'I Love You' Poem by millie st.claire

When I Say 'I Love You'

Rating: 5.0


Let's get together
and say we'll be forever...

No fussing
No fighting,
just two people trying to make amends.

I'll say i love you,
will you say it back?

I dont tell anyone my deepest secrets,
but i told you,
So when i tell you i love you,
will you be true?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kyle Shield Laster 15 July 2008

this is a really nice piece. 'just two people trying to make amends...' great phrase.

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