Dave Tanwar

Rookie (July 17 / Jodhpur, India)

When Sun Kissed The Sea - Poem by Dave Tanwar

Look at the dusking Sun kissing Sea, so divine
Oh blushing Sea, turning into blood wine
I wonder how long this rapture will last
For how long Sun upon Sea its spell will cast

And soon might crimson turn into embrace tight
When Sun will love Sea away from everyone's sight
Night that's absconding over Sun's burning cast
And Sea will melt in Sun's shadow surpassed

On their romance sky when spy through stars eyes
Waves of Sea when raise and they both hide
They love so desperate that every second forever last
Who know when morning knock and bright rays blast

Oh blushing Sea, turning into blood wine
When Sun kiss Sea on its lips, so divine
Fear of divorce that morning might bring
Fearless while in romance they swing

Like Sappho on coast they grow young and play
in Sun's love strong Sea's gentle heart sway
But everything is silent now, maybe now they sleep
In each other's embrace, on each other's lips asleep

Sun hear now the calls of the wind
Wake up on crimson Sea like tender hind
And dawning Sun kiss Sea so divine
Yet unconscious Sea blushes & turn into blood wine


Comments about When Sun Kissed The Sea by Dave Tanwar

  • Rookie Eman Awad (8/18/2009 12:51:00 AM)

    Firstly, ur rhyming is great and the poem is amazing, many descriptions of nature merged with romance, good work
    keep up (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Elizebeth Mccallister (8/17/2009 11:48:00 PM)

    this is such a beautiful poem... bravo! magnifico! romance is this poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 17, 2009



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