When The Sun Rises Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

When The Sun Rises

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When the sun rises
It ignites the world
And humanity rises
As its rays cascade
Everyone is fueled to shine.

When the sun let her golden beams rest
And hides in its private place
The world changes its dress
From the blanket of the night
And humanity rests.

Sun is the ruler of clocks
That sets day and night
The great marker
Of humanity's time.

Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 30 August 2020

The sun gives life. It ripens fruit, but it burns my poor skin when I'm in my birthday suit*! *birthday suit American slang for being naked

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Bill Cantrell 30 August 2020

What a beautiful poem showing the connection and relation to the good earth, just beautiful! ! ! If you wish, read my poem...my blue child....it also shows the connection, but be proud, best poem I have read in quite awhile

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Sandra Feldman 31 August 2020

A most enchanting and highly pleasing poetic work! Three most charming stanzas. The interaction of life with Time, the Sun being the protagonist in this lovely poetic dance. The last stanza, a marvel, one of the best ever written on the subject! " Sun is the ruler of clocks That sets day and night, The great maker Of humanity's time." A true delight.

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Anjandev Roy 31 August 2020

The great marker Of humanity's time.......excellent write.....thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Tom Allport 01 September 2020

A wonderful write of the sun's magic light...well penned

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Yiyan Han 17 November 2020

I tender to think Sun as a metaphor for hope and bright future. God is Sun, and God is Light. Wonderful piece of flying colours!

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Terry Craddock 15 September 2020

I wrote the poem 'Soul Leaps Forth Touches Fingertip Creator' inspired by the poem 'When The Sun Rises' by the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin and dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin.

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 September 2020

If sun comes with full of its light then the universe gets back its life If sun goes with its light then the universe feels sadness in dark but those people cares the true sun of insightful inside s/he always stays in the enlightened realm of life either sun comes or not

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Terry Craddock 12 September 2020

that after false dawn birth moment, when light first fingernail slips, above dark unseen mountain or horizon, when light first spreads out into absolute land darkness, when countless stars in shimmering light twinkling glory, still diamond lace satin dark night sky, on clear nights which reach out touch soul, that is the moment when spirit sudden rapture rises, unstoppable leaps forth touches fingertip creator

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Sun is the ruler of clocks That sets day and night The great marker Of humanity's time. You are right, the sun is the time keeper of hunmanity. When the sun rises all beings rise up and engage in each one's way and with the sunset all keep themselves under the night blanket and rest. You have beautifully conveyed the truth..10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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