john tiong chunghoo

Bronze Star - 2,466 Points (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

When We Fell Out Of Love - Poem by john tiong chunghoo

when we fell out of love
it was a storm of leaves
pieces of us fell everywhere
familiar spots, they fade like
fallen leaves that eventually bond
with eternity without a trace


Comments about When We Fell Out Of Love by john tiong chunghoo

  • Rookie Francesca Johnson (7/29/2006 4:52:00 AM)

    So few words and yet, saying so much. I like 'a storm of leaves, pieces of us fell everywhere' - describes it perfectly. Thank you, John, for this one.

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  • Rookie Raynette Eitel (7/28/2006 6:24:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful, sad image, John. I like it.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 28, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 19, 2010


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