Treasure Island

john tiong chunghoo

(Jan 21,1960 / NEW YORK)

When we fell out of Love


when we fell out of love
it was a storm of leaves
pieces of us fell everywhere
familiar spots, they fade like
fallen leaves that eventually bond
with eternity without a trace

Submitted: Friday, July 28, 2006
Edited: Thursday, August 19, 2010

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  • Francesca Johnson (7/29/2006 4:52:00 AM)

    So few words and yet, saying so much. I like 'a storm of leaves, pieces of us fell everywhere' - describes it perfectly. Thank you, John, for this one.

    Love, Fran xx (Report) Reply

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