When You Feel Like Giving Up Poem by miyah jones

When You Feel Like Giving Up



when your down, im gonna always be around, so no need to frown. when your hurting, I hurt too, it seems as if I know what your goin through.It seems you hide so much inside, knowmatter what im gonna be here to ride or die. It seems like knowmatter what we go through, I always stay n luv with u. When you leave, its like you take a piece of my heart along too. My luv 4 you is so true, I thought 4 the rest of my life I would be with YOU.

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Rex Copperfield 19 April 2012

Good sentiments but it could use a better execution

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miyah jones

miyah jones

chicago, illinois
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