Where Do Woman's Eyes Fall? Poem by Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Where Do Woman's Eyes Fall?

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At the first instance a woman sees a man
On his hair, face and skin then his posture.
She notices his clothes and mannerism.
Her eyes rest on his vibes and hygiene too.

Bald head and pot belly repel her eyes.
Shabby clothes and crooked teeth irritate her eyes.
Posture with hunch or slump, withdraws her eyes.
Face opaque to emotion dulls her likes.

Dense hair, fair skin and pointed nose merit.
Branded clothes in agreeable shades score marks.
Broad shoulders and deft hands are bonus.
Face and assuring eyes get her confidence.
11.07.2017

Sunday, July 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: attraction
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Aravayal, karaikudi, Tamil Nadu, South India
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