hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 55,073 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Where Should I - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Where should I bow head first?
And who should be at the last?
I could not decide it any way
It had meaning that could only say

Mother earth is super
That has kept us happier
Given all sort of refuge
We need to pay respect and oblige

Not a finger should be raised by anyone
We have granted that right to none
It is holier than holy
We owe everything wholly

Mother gives birth
She has brought us on earth
She owes respect of unparallel
Never found elsewhere to tell

Both are great asset
They shape our luck or fate
We are indebted for our survival
We need no words, written or oral

I am speechless for both of them
I will go to any extent then
To uphold honor and name
If no then it shall be sheer shame

Today female lot suffer
Opinions till differ
We have given inferior status
We need second and honest look thus


Comments about Where Should I by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/15/2014 7:38:00 AM)

    Stars Algerie likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2013 7:03:00 PM)

    Sambar Wadi
    Mother gives birth.. She has brought us on earth
    She owes respect of unparallel... Never found elsewhere to tell..... Excellent... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2013 10:59:00 AM)

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    jacquie ***
    true friend.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2013 10:57:00 AM)

    Promila Sharma
    Mother gives birth
    She has brought us on earth
    She owes respect of unparallel
    Never found elsewhere to tell (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2013 12:05:00 AM)

    long poem


    Justin Mazza27 minutes ago
    a longer poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/19/2013 11:26:00 PM)

    Where should I bow head first?
    And who should be at the last?
    I could not decide it any way
    It had meaning that could only say (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 20, 2013


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