Where To Go And Cry Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Where To Go And Cry

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Where to go any cry?
I feel so much shy
It is unbearable pain
Ike unstoppable rain

I do not know where from it came
Mental peace was claimed first
I was made restless
With worry and sullen face

Where would I prefer to go?
Churches, temple or mosques to show
With all that healing
I was quite willing

I found complete peace
Complete calm and No noise
As if it was silence home
Everybody’s refuge and surely welcome

I folded hand and prayed
I felt pinch and was little dismayed
Today I have come here to seek guidance
To get some relief from pain at once

It could have been made regular practice
He was almost there to listen to voice
I just closed eyes and remembered
All my sins were opened and regret offered

“I shall repeat it no more”
I sincerely took pledge and swore
I shall be here not for any favor
But to seek guidance and honor

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2013

Where to go any cry? I feel so much shy

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2013

Ramesh Rai and Jen Julia like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 January 2022

Where to go any cry? I feel so much shy It is unbearable pain Ike unstoppable rain....wonderful first stanza! An excellent poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2013

sounds like he has done something that he truly regrets Zenovia Barksdale20 minutes ago He seems like someone who is looking for forgiveness for something that is eating his conscience. Comment +1 ^

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2013

^ B Valentine22 minutes ago I can appreciate the search for guidance, meaning and a spiritual center. Comment +1 influential.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2013

Jessica Dinehart26 minutes ago Im not sure if this is from a memory, fear, or just inspiration.... but i enjoyed the thought it provoked in me.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2013

like it. Kaylee BowenLess than a minute ago I like the poem, but i don't quite understand it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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