While Responding Poem by Vera Sidhwa

While Responding

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While responding

While responding to this world,
I thought it strange how they acted.
They hadn't learned their lesson
Not today or yesterday.

The common response was to
Whatever they wanted
In spite of the word
Got tainted.

It seemed they didn't
Care about God
And the pity was they
Thought he wasn't there.

While responding to this world
I thought it strange how they acted
They hadn't learned their lesson
About how to take care of each other.

Saturday, February 13, 2016
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Rajnish Manga 14 February 2016

Very well articulated but at the same time contemplating about the truth of life around us. It seemed they didn't / Care about God / They hadn't learned their lesson / About how to take care of each other.

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