Brie Carter

Rookie - 0 Points (March 12,1994 / Dalton)

While You Were Sleeping - Poem by Brie Carter

While you were sleeping I felt your heart beating
While you were sleeping in my head love was repeating
While you were sleeping all I could do was smile
While you were sleeping I watched you for a while
While you were sleeping I always held your hand
While you were sleeping I knew where my heart would land
While you were sleeping you would hold me near
While you were sleeping I would cry out all my tears
While you were sleeping from you I knew I wouldn't part
While you were sleeping I gave to you my heart.


Comments about While You Were Sleeping by Brie Carter

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (7/27/2009 10:54:00 PM)

    this is filled with emotions again friend.. nice indeed! ! !

    with love
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  • Rookie - 145 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (6/21/2009 7:16:00 PM)

    excellent poetry............... nice rhyming.. nice mood. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 25, 2009



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