Whirling And Whirling Poem by Neela Nath Das

Whirling And Whirling

Rating: 4.8


The herb in a desert he saw,
amidst the whirling of sand,
whirling and whirling,
making an upward tunnel it went.
Dying in thirst,
the herb watery but
venomous he knew.
Licking lips,
yet, can't chew.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Babatunde Aremu 16 May 2013

Life in the desert is tortous. Well written. I like it

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 May 2013

TO DIE IN EASE can't chew but licked in hard time the option we chose very nice

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Heather Wilkins 03 July 2013

without water is deadly. In the desert is a painful experience

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Yasmin Khan 28 June 2013

full of poisonous life, it can be a metaphor for a human too.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 22 May 2013

You have pictured a situation and a philosophy that often one comes across but is stuck! EXcellent!

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David Wood 18 May 2013

I was in a dedeft once. It rained! A lovely poem Hari.

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R.j. Wynn 16 May 2013

Poor one, I pray for him the miracle of Jesus.

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