Whirlpools Poem by Perdita Young (Hanna Wang)

Whirlpools

Rating: 5.0


Whirlpools at the bottom
of a deep pond
Fermenting clusters
of unseen waves-

The flood may wash over-
Over the dam,
over the sand,
and over the hills
destroying everything on its way.

All hell may break loose
Letting monsters out
with the flame.

Oct.17th,2016.

Whirlpools
Friday, March 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: water,love,passion,warning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 11 April 2018

A timely warning but who cares!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2018

Fermenting clusters is brilliantly observed with beauty of love of water. Moon-stars may do magic and all may break loosely. Brilliant poem is excellently penned...10

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