nice beaches that r so
calm when u walk over the sand
and u can go places where u havnt
been before so the only way to get out there
is to go there where u want to
I love the completly candid nature of your writings, it is very defiant and shows what you are thinking, even if it doesn't make sense to the rest of the world. I think it may be a little more effective if you write full words (i.e. 'are' instead of 'r') But lovely poem altogether! I love it :)
good job ben! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i like it alot
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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