Jacob Guinn

Rookie (05-18-1994 / San Ramon, California)

Who Am I? - Poem by Jacob Guinn

I'am the son without the dad
I'am the boy who goes through the bad
I'am the guy who cant succeed in life
I'am the old man who has no wife
I'am the missing guy who can't be found
I'am the corpse underground
I'am the guy who everyone uses
I'am the man who has had many bruises
I'am the food left in the pot
I'am the dying man just here to rot.


Comments about Who Am I? by Jacob Guinn

  • Rookie - 11 Points Clinton Ekeh (6/5/2012 8:00:00 PM)

    Son, don't know if you have ever heard about Jesus Christ... Only and only in him would you ever discover your true identity. Without Him, you will forever be a familiar stranger to yourself... Who Am I? - I am Christ's(1Corinthians 3: 23) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Hassan Adan (6/2/2012 4:42:00 PM)

    I enjoyed reading this poem, keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (5/30/2012 8:49:00 AM)

    the journey within begins with the question 'who am i? ' and the answer keeps changing as one 'grows' and writing poetry is an inward journey! go on, young man! best, indira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sajna Kailas (5/30/2012 6:20:00 AM)

    nice poem. loved its writing style. you are great! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,937 Points Elena Sandu (5/30/2012 3:44:00 AM)

    Wonderful written, I know of many who get old and still don't not known who they are. I also don't know who am I or what I am. I admire your self knowledge, loved this poem. Thank you for share,10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 30, 2012



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