Who Can Be Real Friend? Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Who Can Be Real Friend?

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Noble, simple and honest friend
Who can take you to logical end?
Never put you in shame and always offer
All help in time and opinion never differ

Not always agreeing yes in yes
Even criticism you may always face
Pay sometime price for having friendship
Never shed tears and but hide and weep

Consider problem as of his own
Friend’s problem never disown
Even at personal risk relation maintain
Danger, if any, keep off and contain

Insist on not doing anything wrong
Decline the offer but walk along
Thwart any move which may lead to fall
Show the correct path with timely call

Many may suggest to go in bar
Long highway race in speeding car
Such friends deserve complete bar
Real friend may remain always far

He, who is real friend, stands to loose
Still he remains and nice friends choose
It is his real vision and long sight
In the real crisis he will prove right

This is simple advice and call
You should think ahead and always recall
Past mistakes rectified in future’s plan
Keeping away bad friends with permanent ban

This will prevent you from landing in trouble,
Bad friends will disappear as water bubble
Real will stay at the end of the race
Problem, if any, may not run away and face

Friends are indeed life’s part and parcel
Bright at studies and in performance excel
I wish and pray for such friend circle
Life long friendship bond like magic and

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kamlesh Ambalal 26 July 2009

wish and pray for such friend to have This can bring change and make to behave Simple logic but excellent result Life always happy and no more insult ...i wish everybody should hve such friends.. good write with beautiful ideas...10

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 26 July 2009

He, who is real friend, stands to loose Still he remains and friends choose It is his vision and long sight In the real crisis he will be right .......................................... Amazing, beautiful and really heart touching............

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Rajaram Ramachandran 27 July 2009

A full definition you have given for a real friend, saying 'Bad friends will disappear as water bubble. Real will stay at the end of the race.'

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Bharati Bhikhubhai 28 July 2009

Noble, simple and honest friend Who can take you to logical end? Never put you in shame and offer All help and opinion never differ person who is always by your side...10

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Bhanubhai Montu Shah 29 July 2009

Many may suggest to accompany in bar Long race and speeding away in car Such friends deserve complete bar who comes to ur rescue intime...10

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Vijay Suwarnkar 09 October 2009

Noble, simple and honest friend Who can take you to logical end?

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Sachin Goswami 04 October 2009

Noble, simple and honest friend Who can take you to logical end? Never put you in shame and offer

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Sagarika Shah 03 October 2009

Consider own problem as mole Friend’s problems as mountain Even at risk relation maintain

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Rupa Shah 02 October 2009

Not always yes in yes Even criticism always face Pays price for having friendship Never shed tears and continue to weep

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 September 2009

‘Not always yes in yes…’ Yes I say yes to your this poetic yes. ‘Criticisms help to filer out inadequacies but unjust praise sure to out phrase. Ten Ms. Nivedita UK PS Invite you to read my poems with comments and or criticism Sir. niv

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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