Who Has Done This To You? Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

Who Has Done This To You?

Rating: 5.0


I've never seen such eyes
looking at me as if I had
all the answers in the world
listening eyes focused attentive and...
so innocently tender
it's hard to watch you cry

who has done this to you?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miroslava Odalovic 13 November 2011

Thanks both of you for a heart felt comment. I guess no one is completely up to the task when it comes to healing pain. I think this person's tears are a good point to start. And I swear I've never seen such eyes, the lines above are not good enough to depict them. Thanks again, it was energizing :)

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 12 November 2011

i know this is sad for the person in your poem is crying but i like the idea that she has been looking at you like you are her hope and you are the only one that matters nice Miroslava

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