Pirate Love Magic Man

Rookie (2/13/71 / VIRGINIA)

Who Is This Girl I Have Met - Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

The girl I can't talk to,
The girl I can't reach to.
The girl my heart beats for,
The girl my soul hopes for.
Who is this girl I have met,
The girl I love for,
The girl I live for.
The girl I wait for,
The girl I wish for.
Who is this girl I have met?
Her name is five letters of the alphabet,
To know them is ''LOVE''..


Comments about Who Is This Girl I Have Met by Pirate Love Magic Man

  • Rookie DELETED NOW (8/22/2008 7:22:00 PM)

    it's fine what ur doing for her...I know she's not me
    but u have to let her do something
    or then it sounds like she nothing or
    perhaps a robot (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Writing Until My Fingers Bl33d (7/26/2008 7:29:00 PM)

    mmm... lovely poem. i think this is my fav.
    xoxox (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Millie: willalwayshavehope! ! (7/1/2008 6:28:00 PM)

    when i read this poem.
    i feel like your really in love.
    and you would do anything for that girl.
    beautiful.


    x3
    mill (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (6/20/2008 5:07:00 PM)

    I liked the repetition, but I thought the lines chosen were not the most enticing
    for the reader.So I gave it a seven. I could be wrong on this one. It's just how I feel.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Coreena Dejesus (6/17/2008 12:17:00 AM)

    beautiful. lovely piece. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 23, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 14, 2008


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